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Movie Poster: Ring Rosie

Class trailer review: 3

Name of film:  Toxic Avenger
Year released: 1985
Genre of film: Horror/comedy
Your mark: 3 1/2

positive parts of the trailer:

it is humorous.

Negative parts of the trailer:

to long and repetitive
very random topic and chees for a horror trailer
not very interesting.

Class review: 2

Name of Film: Clover Field
Year Released: 2008
Genre of film: Horror
Your mark: 8/10

Positive thing s about the trailer:

the collision cutting from the party was very good
jiggered camera work which created tension
interesting concept- teases us
ideal for the target audience.

Negative things about the trailer:

it is risky having one scene
and there is spoilers of spoilers
plus it wasn't that scary

Class Trailer Review: 1

Name of film: Dawn of the Dead
Year released: 2004
Genre of film: Horror
Your mark: 6/10


Positive thing of the trailer:

the collision cutting, ticking of the clock and the screams are create a lot of tension. the creepiness as well and how it quickly establishes the plot of Ana you can tell she is the final girl. the quick montage at the ends show the characters quickly.

Negative things of the trailer:

too much information and poor text, too many fade in and outs and wasn't very scary and looks like more of an action film.

Bar chart Review average.

 

Average score: 6/10

Focus Group Screening

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=40WPeKsF6uA

1.       Score 6/10:

Good comments:

Intertitles were good and effective
Restricted narration at the end is perfect
Narrative was clear.

Improvement comments:

Repeated Rosie gets on a bit long
Make the scream play over shots
Some shots start with actors getting ready (cut).
 

2.       Score 6/10:

Good comments:

Tense
Music fits well
Nice camera angles
Good makeup
Location fits
Intertitles excellent

Improvement Comments:

Needs more added to it
Don’t get the staring into the camera
More sound effects
More close ups
Needs a jump scare

 

3.       Score 7/10:

Good comments:

Good use of jump scare at the end

Music is creepy
The intertitles work well

     Improvement Comments:

Maybe think of the outfit and clothing.
 

4.       Score  6/10:

      Good comments:

Sound
Quick Montage

      Improvement Comments:

Bite scene could be better
Zombies running better
Final shots need to be more explained.

 

5.       Score 6/10:

Good comments:

Music is creepy
Good intertitles
Body horror

Improvement comments:

Maybe only using one gunshot instead of two
Cut the gun shot short
Add jump scare

 

 6.       Score  4.5/10

      Good comments:

Music was good with matching intertitles
Shots were done well
Good narrative and gore.

Improvement comments:

Too short
Lack of shots
Continuity error
 
   
 7.       Score 5/10

Good comments:

Nice montage
Good intertitles

Improvement comments:

Very short
Outfit changed

8.       Score 6/10

       Good comments:
Like the music
Narrative was clear
Intertitles were good

Improvement comments:

Like some violence and more gore
Notepad production’s not horror
Shots linger to long

9.       Score 5/10

Good comments:

Music matches the name
Camera angles good
Lots of gore

Improvement comments:

Intertitles too quick
 

      10.   Score 5/10

Good comments:

Conventional characters
Music intertitles
Clear narrative

Improvement comments:

Biting in the neck- see body horror
Zombies not very zombie like
Needs a jump scare

 

11.   Score 6/10

Good comments:

Lighting was good

      Improvement comments:
Needs stronger ending

 

12.   Score 5/10

Good comments:

Liked the music fit with the intertitles
Clear narrative
Good use of gore

Improvement comments:

Long shots
Bigger variety of shots

 

13.   Score 5/10

      Good comments:
Good use of gore
Song matched intertitles

Improvement comments:

Narrative needs work
Variety of sots needed

14.   Score 6/10

      Good comment:
Great intertitles
Creepy music

Improvement comments:

Confusing concept
Needs a jump scare

 

15.   Score 4/10

Good comments:

Music and intertitles flows well
Good gore

Improvement comments:

Too many close ups
Not fluent

16.   Score 7/10

Good comments:

Sound effect is a sort of cliff hanger
 Music great

Improvement comments:

Only a bit of gore
Needs a stranger ending

17.   Sound 6/10:

Good comments:

Music is creepy
Good gore effects
Clear narrative
Conventional characters

Improvement comments:

Add more shots
Stronger ending

Ring Rosie Rough Cut

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